Mission

[MetalMusicMan]

Dare I return to the paradise I have burned? 

No, but I cherish the charred remains

Each blackened fragment must be savored

This pain must be remembered, I will bear it until I die

So you will never forget what you have done



When you see me, you will weep

You will remember the pain you have caused

I will sacrifice happiness for the rest of my life

To make sure that you remember you do not deserve it

A selfish whore should never be



Happiness is no concern of mine,

I dwell in this pathetic state willingly

I cannot imagine it any other way

If I have to die for the rest of my life

To remind you that you do not deserve to live

It's worth it.

[WarKirby]

oooh, spitefull. full of willie-ness. i liked it. i liked the first paragraph best, and 2nd second best, and so on. but i think that was because i saw more of my writing style in the first. last one is really good too,  just very different from my style.

[MetalMusicMan]

Yes, I cater to a less abstract style than you-- A more "prose" style I guess.  The first paragraph definitely resembles your style more so, and conversely, I like the last one the best, haha. 

  Appreciate the props brother, glad you liked it.

[Xclber007]

This was depressing, yet by the time I finished reading your post I had an evil smile on my face.  I suppose I enjoyed the direct honesty of the words and the unyielding resolve(that certainly describes you).  Well said.

[Yoggi]

good stoof