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« on: February 28, 2008, 10:16:06 PM » |
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Waiting for stars to shine from dead bulbs Passes the time Staring up into the blank sky Reveals a truth once hidden Looking to the sky for a sign Hope passes with the day And fades when the sun goes beyond sight The stars fade, and all goes away Night embraces emptiness A cold chill sweeps across the floor The cold sets in Shivering away all the reason to believe Praying for warmth in the sheltered innocence The stars fail to shine from the dead bulbs The cold sets in And consumes the setting sun Disappearing into the horizon Hope flees from sight Disappeared into the horizon The cold sets in Consuming hope Cold refreshed by the progressing night Is shifted aside by the rising sun Hope once again makes a promise A promise of lasting warmth Is displaced by the truth Stars can’t shine from dead bulbs The truth remains And cold will return To envelop the sun Distinguishing warmth, And with its promise of return Comes the promise of a cold chill
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« Reply #1 on: February 29, 2008, 10:41:27 PM » |
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A good little poem there, but Parkway Drive has you beat out! It's funny that this is so similar... since I'm pretty sure you've never listened to them. It's one of my favorites, and has a very similar theme. Check this out:
--- Vanishing points and midnight horizons, Herald another night. Without you by my side.
Bring me the light, Bring me the dawn, Bring me another day. But further, from your arms.
And this world is frozen, And my limbs so numb. Feel the Frostbite. Exceed all hope of coming back alive. And these roads we've chosen, Leave our hearts so numb. As another day, Sets in teeth, Ready to strike.
But there will be no dawn, At these hours. I find my mind, Turns itself in circles, Reigniting the worst of fears, And leaving others to the cold.
Powerless. I'm afraid to lose, These thoughts of you. Please leave me the scars, Just leave me the scars.
Wake (Wake), These are the hours left to ghosts. These are the times, reason fails to reach
These are the places, For which echoes fail to return. And Solitude runs hand in hand with, Disaster.
And this world is frozen, And my limbs so numb. Feel the Frostbite. Exceed all hope of coming back alive. And these roads we've chosen, Leave our hearts so numb. So I'll salvage what little hope I can, From the sun.
Still I'm choking on the words, I should've said, 1,000 times. And I'm cursing every memory, And I'm holding on until, There's nothing left to say.
Every scar, Let Every scar still bare your name. Every scar still bares an angel's face. An angel's face.
And still I chase, I chase the sun.
And still I chase, I chase the sun.--- Oh god, it means so much to me. /tear /tear /tear /tear /tear  I love Parkway Drive so much. Anyway, funny similarities.
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« Reply #2 on: February 29, 2008, 11:50:02 PM » |
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did not notice that at all lol. i found a new band you may like, that i may review in a day or two. they is called moonsorrow. their latest album is 2 songs, one 30 mins, the other 20
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« Reply #3 on: February 29, 2008, 11:53:22 PM » |
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did not notice that at all lol. i found a new band you may like, that i may review in a day or two. they is called moonsorrow. their latest album is 2 songs, one 30 mins, the other 20
But do you see it now that I pointed it out? Or am I crazy? luls. Also, you have a knack for finding that crazy weird shit, Yoggi. I'm intrigued, as always.
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« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2008, 11:09:30 AM » |
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did not notice that at all lol. i found a new band you may like, that i may review in a day or two. they is called moonsorrow. their latest album is 2 songs, one 30 mins, the other 20
But do you see it now that I pointed it out? Or am I crazy? luls. Also, you have a knack for finding that crazy weird shit, Yoggi. I'm intrigued, as always. i see the connection, but i could have done the same with half a dozen (at least), other songs. The idea of cold and frost is common in metal, especially black metal.
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« Reply #5 on: March 01, 2008, 02:28:03 PM » |
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i see that both works have a theme of cold and dawn, but they are common themes and are used pretty differently here.
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