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« on: January 29, 2008, 11:18:30 PM »

I Awake but floating inside my head
My fears manifest themselves into figures my eyes see
Anger tears me apart with his fury
Hatred blackens my body with his burning despise
Turning my sight, I see the one I most fear

He is wearing a cloak, dressed in fine silk
His head tilted down, begins to lift slowly up
Slowly, breathing, I wait until the moment his eyes reach mine
I sacrifice what courage I have left, and look the devil in his darkened eyes

He sees me,
And I see him
With one glare, he pierces my facade, and destroys my image
In once instant, a thousand images from my past resurface:
Crying women, and weakened souls, stained with the charred image of my soul
Deeds I’ve done, and promises I’ve failed, cut again at wounds I have ignored
I have run from him, but now I stand my ground, and look the devil in his darkened eyes.

He sees me, and what I have become
And I see him, and no longer fear his presence
With one glare, he shifts my soul from inside me, and I know
In one instant, I fully realize
I can no longer run from
Truth


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« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2008, 11:58:34 PM »

Hrmn.  Interesting.  I'm not sure what to think of the role that the Devil is playing in this.  It almost seems positive.  Not that there's anything wrong with that, I just wouldn't expect it from you.

Also, stop breaking your computer.  I'm going to charge you to talk to me from now on.  Like, 3 blowjobs per 5 minutes or some ridiculous fee.
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« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2008, 12:55:16 AM »

Hrmn.  Interesting.  I'm not sure what to think of the role that the Devil is playing in this.  It almost seems positive.  Not that there's anything wrong with that, I just wouldn't expect it from you.

Also, stop breaking your computer.  I'm going to charge you to talk to me from now on.  Like, 3 blowjobs per 5 minutes or some ridiculous fee.

the devil is meant to describe Truth, not the devil yourself.

as in, ill get that little devil.
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« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2008, 03:38:07 PM »

i liked this one a fair bit Smiley
i would have guessed the devil was there to represent guilt, but thats just me
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