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« on: November 06, 2007, 11:48:40 AM »

Flying over the billowing green grass
The wind sweeps softly through my hair
From so high I look down,
And wonder what I can really see

In my life there has been consistency
And with that consistency was dependence
Only through solitary would I find the strength to fly
And look over everything I see now

I really did you know
Finished off my life,
And it all seems so clear now
When the wind blows through my hair,
I see what I was, and what I couldn’t be

I wondered what it was like across the line,
Wondering what waited for me on the other side
And it’s wonderful; wind blowing in my hair.
Across my tampered and bruised face
I get scared and I let the wind take me away,
Take me away from what I feel
Because here I can’t hurt anyone, or feel the guilt I did before

I’m pretty glad you know,
Not being there anymore,
My tracks were left uncovered, but I’m not worried
Because I know, on the other side, waits the blowing wind

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« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2007, 01:05:13 PM »

This and the "Fire" one seem to be a bit different than the usual for your writing styles, I like this one better than the fire one, it seems to make more sense to me. 

By the way you totally ripped off Thrice's "The Alchemy Index" which has 4 volumes, one for each element, yarrr.
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« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2007, 01:59:17 PM »

I think he's going more for a captain planet approach with the next 3 being earth, water and heart.
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« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2007, 08:16:52 PM »

I think he's going more for a captain planet approach with the next 3 being earth, water and heart.
ha. not at all sir.

and ya, i was in a slightly odd mood when i wrote today, plus i tried for something different. not sure how much i like them yet...  Undecided
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« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2007, 08:32:49 PM »

i'd say their definitely interesting to read, but i wouldn't say any better or worse than your others stuff
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