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Paradigm
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February 24, 2009, 07:52:30 PM »
Falling in disbelief.
I'm not falling, I'm floating.
Floating on the air,
simply in a different place each second that I am floating.
The air flies past me
and bends around my body.
I finally find happiness,
and I smile.
But as i approach the seemingly infinite darkness,
my happiness fades, as the sun into the night,
and I once again realize I am falling.
I am frightened.
My arms flail and reach to stop me from falling,
but the ground continues to approach and I cannot stop.
I know the end is near,
but it does not comfort me to know this.
I understand now: I am falling, not floating.
Like a great shift in logic,
a Paradigm,
I understand everything has changed,
and I know, that I,
am now changed.
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February 24, 2009, 09:27:17 PM »
Boom goes the dynamite.
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wha?
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March 02, 2009, 09:12:57 PM »
ZOMG WILLIE comment on this!!! The first work i have put on the site in quite a while, and you dont comment on this or mags's one?!!!!?
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If I close my mind in fear, please pry it open.
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March 02, 2009, 09:26:52 PM »
Sorry
I read it. It was pretty decent, but I don't really like it as much as your other work. Mostly because it seems similarly themed but less well done. Paradigm is a sweet word though
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