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« on: June 16, 2008, 12:36:16 PM »

its like that game you always play
where everything just stays the same
and all this fear inside of me
never goes away for you to see

the depth of your heart, a river flows
through shallow water, never grows
and all the fear inside of me,
is yours alone and yours to keep
to be like the game that you always played
when im the board, and the one to blame
and when your piece had gone and moved away,
you packed me up for another day.
But did you know that when you left
i laughed it up, and never wept
for like this game you think your in
i am not yours to win

the games we always play
never wanting things the same
changing whats not ours to own
like a passion for thy neighboor's own
grew a tree a picked the fruit,
from a life not yours, no single truth
and when the day passes to night
we're left with nothing but the fright


oh the games we play
they never stay the same
always wanting whats not ours
to blind to see a person's heart

the games we play
ignore a life for another day

the games we play
you chose the game,
and think you've won

the games we play
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« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2008, 10:30:55 PM »

i don't usually see you use repetition, that's very different for you.  I like:

"But did you know that when you left
i laughed it up, and never wept"

Also, you should proof these you noob.  You have some grammar errors and whatnot Tongue
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« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2008, 10:56:00 PM »

Very different. In my head I read it like an Irish jig and it came out fun and light.
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« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2008, 11:54:38 AM »

Very different. In my head I read it like an Irish jig and it came out fun and light.

oh man, reading that like an irish jig / sailor song makes it like 10x better, lmfao
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