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« on: March 05, 2008, 12:28:22 AM »

Hate
It’s all too loud
This noise I hear,
Suffering through the times
This noise I hear screams over me
I cannot hear anything else
I don’t remember when it became present
I don’t remember what its saying
I just know it’s too loud to think
If you listen close, you can see that above all else
Hate screams loudest in this world


Chances

Goodbye
I won’t overstay my welcome
Trust me,
I promise to leave with good grace
Just give me a chance
I’m sorry for everything
I’ve tried
Wait, give me a chance
Above all else
I will walk out with my head up
Because I have always run with my head down
And I swear ill walk out with my chin held high
Because if it’s one thing I know,
It’s that I can
And I will
 
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« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2008, 09:10:17 PM »

Kind of a break from the norm for you, this shorter format?  I like the simplicity of them.  They don't touch me in special places as much as the other ones, but they are good.
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« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2008, 11:57:44 PM »

shhhh! dont say that. my poems dont touch anyone in special places, that was the agreement
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